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Ritalee

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撑你!

2007-11-20 16:14

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QUOTE:

原帖由 prince 于 2007-11-20 15:41 发表

寓言都系一般记叙文,小学生文体不一定学唔到东西!! 难道你在寓言中体会唔到道理吗?

我不是这个意思.em108 我如果现在还是小学时代的我看到这文章,我一定看不懂. 不过现在看到我只能说它写得很小学.

2007-11-20 16:42

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支持一下吧，贴出来也有诚意的啦。哈哈

2007-11-20 18:47

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别把自己看得太高，有时我们都不一定比得上小学生呢！！em109 em109 em109

2007-11-25 18:50

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无言对待

2007-11-27 08:32

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谢谢哦!!em121 em121 em106 em106 em106

2007-12-24 20:01

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